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Cul-de-Sac

It's 11:47 PM in Whispering Pines Estates and the HOA group chat just blew up. Someone reported a "suspicious figure" in the cul-de-sac. Over the next two hours, four neighbors record themselves dealing with the situation. By 2 AM, somebody's mailbox is on fire. Nobody knows whose. The group chat has nine hundred unread messages.

Designed by Justin Gary· 45 min ·5 scenes ·4 roles ·v1.0
The world
Whispering Pines Estates is a quiet, gated, four-house cul-de-sac with a community pool, an over-active Facebook page, and a group chat that nobody asked to be added to but everybody is in. At 11:47 PM tonight, someone posted: "There is a suspicious figure walking on Whispering Pines Court. Please confirm visual and report." Nobody knows who sent it. Nobody knows what the figure looks like. Everybody has a theory. The group chat has not stopped buzzing in twenty minutes. Four neighbors are about to make this everyone's problem. None of them is going to come out of this looking great.
Visual direction

Suburban-night HDR realism. Streetlight orange, security-light white, pool-light teal-blue. Slightly overexposed, slightly too crisp, the way a Ring camera looks. Each neighbor's house has a distinct visual signature — one has a manicured lawn, one has a pool, one has a yard full of trampolines, one has a porch covered in succulents. Vertical 9:16 framing throughout. Leave the center third clear for the performer.

The roles

4 roles — each records from a different vantage. Roles can't be swapped mid-session.

The HOA President

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Karen-coded HOA president. Has been waiting for a moment like this her entire life. Currently in her bathrobe, on her front porch, managing the situation from a folding chair she dragged outside.

Direction

Speak with absolute, unwavering authority on every subject. Be friendly, be helpful, never break character. The funniest version of this character believes 100% she is the hero of the night. Heighten when challenged.

The True Crime Wife

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Listens to four true-crime podcasts simultaneously while doing Pilates. Has been waiting her entire adult life for an opportunity to deploy what she has learned. The night is finally here. Recording from her kitchen island in matching pajama sets.

Direction

Use true-crime-podcast voice. Capital-S Serious. Speak like you are narrating an investigation that is happening in real time around you. Use specific jargon ("known associates," "the timeline," "method, motive, and opportunity"). Take everything completely seriously. The audience will laugh because you don't.

The Stoner Dad

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Was just trying to take out the trash. Got pulled into this against his will. Filming because his wife is making him. Currently in pajama pants and a Grateful Dead T-shirt, sitting on the curb.

Direction

Be friendly, slightly tired, slightly checked-out. Use a lot of qualifiers ("kind of," "I dunno," "I mean"). The funniest version is the dad who keeps trying to de-escalate everything and is the only person here making any sense. Resist the urge to be wacky — be GROUNDED.

The New Neighbor

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Moved in last Tuesday. Has not met anyone. Was unpacking when the group chat exploded. Has been silently following along on her phone in increasing panic. Filming from inside her unboxed living room.

Direction

Be earnest, nervous, eager to please. Speak like a person who has just moved into a new neighborhood and DESPERATELY wants her new neighbors to like her. The comedy is in her watching the situation spiral with growing horror while staying outwardly friendly. Let the calm crack a little more in each scene.

The arc
SCENE 1 T+00

Visual Confirmation Requested

"How does each neighbor first react to the HOA alert, and what does their reaction reveal about who they are? "

9 min
SCENE 2 T+09

The Group Chat (Now With Reply-Alls)

"Twenty minutes in, the group chat is out of control. How is each neighbor reacting to what other neighbors are saying about them? "

9 min
SCENE 3 T+18

Visual Contact (Unconfirmed)

"Each neighbor has now "seen something" or claims to have. What did they see, and how much of it is real? "

9 min
SCENE 4 T+27

Mailbox on Fire

"Something has gone actually, physically wrong on the cul-de-sac. How does each character react when the situation gets real? "

9 min
SCENE 5 T+36

2 AM

"The night is over. What does each character record now that the adrenaline has crashed? "

9 min